Slowly but steady

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Today I have added another chapter part and as I said yesterday I have reach 60.000 words which is so awesome 🙂 When I started writing it this year I did not expect that 7 months later I would have reached 60.000 words and 10 chapters after I have tried to write it so many years and doing so many attempts. Thanks to all who have help me get so far.

My latest expected deadline is now 8. September which is 1 day before I was going to finished Chapter 11 the one I am writing this moment 🙂

Small thing I have a summer party at work tomorrow so maybe no part tomorrow but will try to squish it in 🙂

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Chapter 11 – Rescue – Part 5

Jun Chen looked at Ling Chang and at Hui Wen’s death body. “I promise I will stay calm no matter who or what I am fighting” Jun Chen said and for a second it seemed like that Hui Wen lips moved and smiling but when Jun Chen closed and opened his eyes the smile was gone and he knew that he was gone. Ling Chang could not hold the tears back any longer and even that she could feel the rage inside her like the other times that she needed it, she kept it inside and prevented her eyes from becoming red as blood but the powers inside her was stronger than before so she suddenly started shaking: Jun Chen noticed it quickly and knew he had to do something to calm her down but as he held out a hand, Ling Chang pulled her sword and instead of taking the hand she attacked and only a quick move from Jun Chen prevented him from losing it. “Ohh, the young lady is on fire” Gang Chen yelled from his throne and kicked the death body of Jiang Chen to make her even more raged, making Jun Chen trying to think fast. Gang Chen could see the kicking made Ling Chang loose more and more of her focus not being angry so he started kicking Jiang Chen even more while yelling to Jun Chen to keep him from thinking. “I would not stand near her, she seems like a volcano ready to explode at anytime now” he yelled loudly and mocking. Ling Chang attacked Jun Chen who only managed to block the attack by pure luck and the soldiers forming the circle around them started to worry for their lives even that they was still busy fighting against Gang Chen’s men. “Your girlfriend is not the sweet girl you expected” Gang Chen yelled expecting Jun Chen to loose his ideas even more but instead a smile appeared on Jun Chen face and yelled back to Gang Chen “Thanks” and while Gang Chen’s turned from the happy face to the confused face, Jun Chen blocked another attack from Ling Chang and with out a word to her, he kissed her on the lips. At first Ling Chang tried to escape the kiss but just as she was able to guide the sword against Jun Chen, she relaxed and returned his kissing. “Noooooooo, you was supposed to kill each other, not become lovers” Gang Chen finally yelled as Jun Chen and Ling Chang stopped kissing. “Kill them, kill them all now” Gang Chen yelled and pointed at some bowmen, who started aiming at first before they stopped and asked “What about our own men?” And now it was Gang Chen’s face and body which was full of rage and he yelled as high he could “Do I look like one who cares, kill them all now” and arrows starts flying thought the air, hitting both good and bad people.

Chapter 11 – Rescue – Part 4

Ling Chang could feel the rage in her body suddenly disappeared and soon the red glow from her eyes disappeared too. In one movement she was fighting and in the next she had closed her eyes as she started to screaming loud in a mix of pain and horror when suddenly a silence followed. Ling Chang opened her eyes to figure out why the silence and noticed that no one was moving like they all had turned to ice. She walked around between the men slowly and watched one bloody fight after another before she quickly moved and reached the fight Ling Chang was fighting. “Please wake up” she almost silence said as she worried that the voice would destroy him but nothing happened to him or any of the soldiers. She looked around and even Gang Chen on the farthest away she could see were frozen except for her and the mix of being alone and the horrors of what she had done, made tears starting to run down her checks. She was all out in tears, not paying attention to her surroundings at all when suddenly a cold hand touched her and she almost flew up with the sword pulled and ready to fight but quickly removed it when she noticed it was Jun Chen who had returned to life. “What happened?” Jun Chen asked as they hugged and warmed each other up. Ling Chang looked at him but had troubles finding the words but managed to say a single word “Sorry”, making Jun Chen quickly hold her closer and reply “It is not your fault” and just as the words had left his mouth another know voice replied “You are right, I am the one, making this” a floating Hui Wen said which at first made Ling Chang want to scream but his calm voice made her keep quiet. “I just want to say that I am so proud of you two” Hui Wen continued and Jun Chen wanted to say something but Hui Wen stopped him “No talking, just yet. I am also happy that you have found each other both in training and in love and yes, I knew all the time so next time, don’t try to hide it” Hui Wen body became more and more transparent for each word leaving his mouth. “You have my blessing and now go with peace” Hui Wen said and as the last word left his mouth he was gone and before Ling Chang and Jun Chen could do nothing, they were suddenly back at their places fighting like nothing had happened. Ling Chang Looked around to find Hui Wen and found him laying in the mud, bleeding from his back surrounded by four enemy soldiers and she knew what she had to do. She started to fight her way against the body and just as she reach the body, Jun Chen was there too. They killed the soldiers around his body like they was wheat on a field and they started to stop the bleedings as Lei appeared with some men and started yelling out commands. “Men, form a circle around us and keep the line to split up the enemy” He yelled and the nearby men quickly started to doing what they were told. Lei turned against Jun Chen and Ling Chang as he wanted to say something but Gang Chen broke in “One old foul death and buried, and four left, this is becoming the best day in my life” he said mocking and laughing making Jun Chen prompted yelled back “He is not death yet” which just made Gang Chen laugh even louder and more mocking. “Who said that I was talking about Hui Wen?” He said as he held a small break from laughing and pointed at Jiang Chen who appeared normal at first before blood appeared on his throat and when he tried to screaming his mouth filled with blood as he fell to the ground as a doll. Jun Chen could feel the sadness grow inside him but instead of giving Gang Chen the pleasure, he just yelled back “You will pay for every death, you will cost today” and Jun Chen was about to run off from Hui Wen and Ling Chang when a hand stopped him. “Let go of me, Ling Chang” Jun Chen almost yelled without turning around but the hand did not let go and Jun Chen turned around to force the hand to let go when he noticed that it was Hui Wen. “I am sorry my boy, but cannot let you go before you promise me you won’t let the rage inside you, control you” Jun Chen wanted to yell but a calmness filled his body faster and without any words Hui Wen released and Jun Chen was free once more. Ling Chang smiled to see that Hui Wen was alive but the happiness was short as in the next he closed his eyes and stopped breathing.

60.000 words reached

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I am still writing the latest chapter part yet but the way the writing is going I am sure to hit 60.000 words today so wanted to give it as a little taste before my part will be ready later. So only 24000 words before I have reached my goal I know I have never written this much on a single paper work before so is so happy

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Chapter 11 – Rescue – Part 3

He turned around when a cold feeling started to fills body and he fell to the ground while he tried to remove the object which had started the cold and to his fear it was a sword. He cut his fingers on the sword, making him try to look up and tried to scream for help but his mouth ran fast full of blood as the sword keep going through his body and soon he felt the handle reaching his back and forced him to the ground. He gave up on getting a sight of the sun a last time and feel to the ground exhausted when a pair of feet suddenly appeared in front of him and with the last energy he managed to get his head up before the energy was out once more but instead of falling back to the ground instantly a pair of hands grab his head and a known taunt voice said “Now I only need to kill two more, old fool” Hui Wen looked at the person and even with blurred sight he knew who his killer was but his mouth was too full of blood and instead of yelling for help he spit the blood right in the face and said ice cold “You will never win” and just as the words had left his mouth the hands disappeared and he hit the ground hard before the sword from his back was gone too and the pain disappeared before he closed a last time. The killer clean the sword and face before lowly said “They would not know what hit them” and just as fast the attack had happen, the killer had left the screen.

Chapter 11 – Rescue – Part 2

Hui Wen tried to make an opening so more soldiers could help him and Lei with the division of soldier but every time it seem liked he got it open and their soldiers started to appear they was swiftly force back by a new wave of enemy soldiers and in despair he yelled “Ling Chang were are you” and tried to look after her but she was no were in sight. Sudddenly an opening appeared in from him and he prepared himself for fight but instead of an great enemy, Ling Chang was suddenly in front of him and he could see her eyes was as red as the morning sun. The sight made him almost shallow his tongue as fear grew inside him if she had gotten so much taste for blood now that she had turned evil. Her eyes looked at him like she was aiming for any weak spots in his armour and without a warning, she suddenly started running against him, making him not being able to think twice so he tried to point at her with his sword but it was already too late as in the next she was past him and a scream was heard. He turned slowly around and a now death soldier was covering the ground with his blood. “Sorry, master” Ling Chang said calmly like the killing of the now death man had been a fly and before Hui Wen could say thanks, she ran on and the blood on the sword was had not disappeared in the wind before another kill had happened. Hui Wen shocked his head, what I am going to do with her before he noticed that the opening was filled by the resistance now and he could continued his plan.

Chapter 11 – Rescue – Part 1

A heavy wind appears and blows away much of the smoke for a while just for the group to see Gang Chen in front of lots of soldiers. A laughter breaks out from Gang Chen. “Do you really think, the four of you can beat my army?” Making Hui Wen step forward from and away from the others. Ling Chang tries to stop him but he gets free from her grasp and yelled back with not single fear in his voice. “First step of preventing a trap is knowing it is there and release it” before pulling his sword and swings it around. Gang Chen laughter continues loudly but is interrupted by a scream of pain from a nearby soldier. “What happens back there?” Gang Chen yells after his laughter has stopped and another soldier is hit by another arrow before someone can answer. “What kind of tricks are this, Hui Wen” Gang Chen yells and now Hui Wen is the one laughing. “Did you really think I would walk into your trap and risk the life of crown prince without backup?” Ling Chang notices a shadow in the smoke behind them and smiles as the shadow turns into a familiar face. “Lei? Is that you?” Ling Chang ask while raising her sword to be sure it is not an ambush and the man just nods while he puts a finger up to his mouth and soon more men appears in the shadows. Gang Chen does not need much time to think and yells “Attack and kill them all but keep Jiang Chen alive. I want him to hear the death screams of his son” and Hui Wen turns around against his own army and yells “Ready?” And a loud scream returns to him and as he looks forward once more the first enemy soldiers appears and the sword starts swing against the nearest man. Ling Chang turns around against the soldiers too before taking a quick look at Jun Chen whose eyes tells her more than words could do and she turns again Mei Chen but she is gone from the circle and Ling Chang fears her feelings about her being a traitor is true but before she is able to get it confirmed she watched Mei Chen near Hui Wen already killing her first enemy. Ling Chang can feel the mix of rage and jealousy grows inside her and things turns red in front of her, making it easier for her to see though the smoke. Ling Chang attacks and kills the first two men while more and more soldiers appears behind her and she is no longer alone on the battlefield while the death screams are filling the air. Gang Chen laughter is heard from his throne as the ground becomes more and more red from the blood of the death men. Ling Chang fights the best she has learn and the red sight makes her rage grow even wilder than before and soon she have already killed 10 enemies.In the meantime is Jun Chen trying to reach his father on the execution platform but the men, he is fighting is dying just as fast so he is quickly surrounded. “Got you now” a soldiers says laughing as men forms a ring around him and blocks every way of escape but Jun Chen is cold as ice and instead of yelling for help he just starts laughing instead and before the soldier can ask why he is killed by Ling Chang who has watched the mess. “Kill, kill them all” Ling Chang yells in a blood rage while Jun Chen use the change to get on the platform, but as kills the executioner and unties the man about to get executed, the man just picks up the axe from the chopping block nearby. “I am here to save you father” Jun Chen tries to say as the man launches the first attack with the big as and the man just starts laughter which is mixed with the laughter from Gang Chen who can see the action from his throne. “Did you really think it would be that easy?” Gang Chen yells as two soldiers behind him brings forward a man who can only be Jiang Chen. Jun Chen wants to yell something back but the man attacks again and the axe lands right next to Jun Chen feet that he jumps to be sure that he is not hit. “Leave my father alone” Jun Chen yells as he lands safely on the ground again which makes Gang Chen laugh even more and reply “I would not worry about your old man, I will not kill him before you have been killed as like I said I want him to hear every death scream from you and your friends.” Jun Chen blocks an attack from the man with the axe and attacks back but even that the man is small and the axe is back, he is still fast enough to move out of the attack. The man attacks once more and this time he manage to cut some of Jun Chen’s clothes, making Jun Chen yell of annoyance and strike back instantly and this time the man is not fast enough to move and the sword penetrated the man’s chest like butter and he fell to the ground with the axe still in hand. Jun Chen expected fear to appear in Gang Chen’s voice but instead a calm voice continued yelling “Wow, you killed another of my men… I still have another million soldiers waiting for you so do you really think you have what it takes” The calmness bothered Jun Chen but new enemies did not give him much time to think or reply Gang Chen with other than the sounds of sword hitting each other with power. In the meantime had Jun Chen and Lei together with other from the resistance reached the centre of the market and they were now trying to break the enemy into two groups, so they could break the moral of the men in the small group so they had fewer men to focus on, but the amount of enemy soldiers made it a almost impossible task.

Chapter 10 finished

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Now I am finally done chapter 10 and cannot wait to get started on chapter 11 and the remaining 5 chapters incl. chapter 11. Have not yet reached 60.000 words yet but it is getting closer and closer as I am at 57686 words now. I have decide to change the title of chapter 11 to ‘Rescue’ instead of ‘Power of love’ as I felt the other was too long, maybe I will change others too. Thanks for following me so far and would not have a done it without the help I have gotten from so many people.

P.s I forgot to change date for expected finished date yesterday so done it now as I finished chapter 10 and it is 12. September.

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Chapter 10 – Execution – Part 13

“What are you doing, Jun Chen” Ling Chang said almost crying and tried to get the attention of Jun Chen. She could feel the sword playing her skin even that Hui Wen was doing his best to keep it from hurting her. “Leave Ling Chang alone” Hui Wen yelled and without warning was Jun Chen attacking but even that Hui Wen had been seemly defenceless he still managed to block the attack and force Jun Chen away from Ling Chang who quickly stood up. Her eyes was red from the tears that had started to run faster and faster and suddenly Jun Chen came back to himself. “Sorry, sorry, sorry” He said as the sword fell to the ground and Hui Wen Lowed the sword before asking “What happened to you” and Jun Chen looked at them for a moment in silence before he answered. “I just dreamt of my father and he was not my father… He killed us both and guess my feelings for me made me hurt you… Sorry, sorry, sorry” Hui Wen looked at him and returned his sword to the sheath before returning to the sight post to make sure that they were still safe. Ling Chang bowed down and picked up Jun Chen’s sword before handing him it gentle while the tears slowly became fewer. They hugged each other for a while before another female voice broke in “So this is your sister?” And Jun Chen who just thought they had been alone the three of them pulled his sword once more and pointed it against the woman before he lowered it once more when he noticed that it was the lady Mei Chen from the time of searching after Ling Chang. “Mei… Mei Chen?” He managed to say while he tried to make his sword enter the sheath. Mei Chen just nodded and Ling Chang could feel the tension between them so she quickly broke in before they had any chance to continued their talk. “I found her inside the palace, if you remember sending me inside that” Jun Chen said but Jun Chen was too focused on Mei Chen to answered her so Ling Chang continued a bit higher “We searched the palace and ended up figure out that your father has already been taking to the execution grounds” and the rough speaking made a drop of blood fall form her check. Jun Chen finally noticed her speaking and answered “Sorry, I am still confused from the dream” while trying to sound like it was not Mei Chen who had taken his focus. But Ling Chang being a girl knew it was a small lie so she turned around a bit annoyed before continuing “I presume that you have meet before so I do not have to introduce you to each other” she replied angry, making Jun Chen quickly understand what he had done wrong so he hold around her and an answered quickly and honest “Sorry, I won’t keep it a secret anymore, but I meet her when Hui Wen and I was searching for you when you was gone” Ling Chang could not decide if she wanted to be angry or not so she turned around and before she knew it was Jun Chen playing her cheek and at first she was thinking about kissing him but the words form his mouth made her understand what was happening. “Sorry for hurting you” Jun Chen said as he cleaned the blood of her cheek and Ling Chang could feel the pain form the wound as she noticed the blood but being in sight of another made her stop herself from screaming. “Don’t it hurt” Jun Chen asked and Ling Chang just shocked her head trying to hide the pain. Hui Wen who had been focusing on keeping their place a secret suddenly asked “Are you ready to go?” Making Jun Chen stop cleaning Ling Chang and return to focus. “Yes” he replied but before he could pull his sword was Mei Chen breaking the focus “I know I am a woman but are you sure you know what you are doing” she said gentle, making both Jun Chen and Hui Wen listen. “What do you mean” Hui Wen asked gentle from his spot without looking against her. “Gang Chen has been burning the town down like a spoiled child and I am sure that the execution grounds won’t just be him and a few soldiers but his entire army, maybe more if he has gotten any backup” Mei Chen continued and the words had even made Hui Wen turn away from his spot against her before replying “first step of preventing a trap is knowing it is there and release it” Hui Wen said and looked a bit cold at Mei Chen before warming up a bit and replying “What do you know that we don’t” Mei Chen smiled before kneeling on the ground and started to draw the market place on the ground. “This is the market place” She started before drawing soldiers and the execution grounds. “This is where their will be guards and here we will find Jiang Chen if he still are alive by the time we are ready to strike” Mei Chen continued before Ling Chang broke in as she was a bit jealous “How do you know those things?” Ling Chang asked and Mei Chen turned against her and smiled once more “You was the one who saved me from the men inside the palace, but do you really think that they was only going to play with me?” Mei Chen asked before answering the question herself without giving Ling Chang a chance to answer “No, I am a spy… trying to save the emperor just as you are” making the other looks at her with big eyes but no one said anything, making her continued the drawing. “This is were Gang Chen and his most trusted men will be… we have to kill him and his leaders to destroy the army he has or we don’t have a chance to save Jiang Chen… I suggest that we comes from the southern entrance to the market and this way take them by surprise” Hui Wen nods and points out the fewer gaurds on Mei Chen drawing. “Yes, that will be a great idea… we will have a big change to do great damage while saving Jiang Chen” He said just as a male scream is heard from outside the house. In the next the door hit ground with a loud slam and in comes 6 soldiers “In the name of new emperor, hereby under arrest” a soldier yells but instead of just giving up Jun Chen and Hui Wen pulls their swords and stands in front of the women while ruining the drawing. “No” Hui Wen yells back to the soldier who laughing pulls his sword and replies “Good thing, the emperor does not care if you are brought to him death or alive” the remain soldiers pulls their swords too and soon the fight is starting. Ling Chang pulls her sword and points at Mei Chen “I knew you was a traitor” who quickly replies “I am not… Look out” and in the next a soldier attack Ling Chang but Ling Chang is already raging and kills the solider before he can strike. “Thanks” Ling Chang manages to say to Mei Chen who watch her with great terror before Ling Chang attacks another soldier like she was a soldier herself. The small room makes it impossible for anyone to escape and Ling Chang kills the next one by making fly into the fire and soon the fight is much more even. Jun Chen kills a soldier himself while Hui Wen deals with the rest before yelling “We need to attack to save the emperor now or he will be death before we get a second chance” Ling Chang returns to normal and the four of them starts walking against the markets place. Mei Chen is both amazed and scared of what just happened to Ling Chang so she quietly ask her “What happened back there?” And at first Ling Chang is confused before she gets the question and replies “Oh… my father wanted a boy so he trained me but some times a rage take over and make me able to defend myself even against the most terrifying enemies” Mei Chen makes big eyes but keeps her calm. “Great, guess I am the only defenceless one here” she replied which make Ling Chang laugh as they continue walking against the markets place. As they reach the market they spilt up to kill the three guards form Mei Chen’s map but there is no one there and the smoke from the burning houses makes it almost impossible to see the execution grounds. They are back together and Ling Chang is the first to speak again “The guard was not there” and before Jun Chen and Hui Wen can answer her a loud yelling voice breaks in. “Welcome friends, welcome to your death” and they makes a small circle around Mei Chen while trying to figure out where the voice came from.

Chapter 10 – Execution – Part 12

Soon a voice appeared the darkness and as the light reappeared Ling Chang was above him. “Thank goodness, you are awake now… we started to worry” Ling Chang said with tears in her eyes. “Keep your voices down” Hui Wen said as Jun Chen woke up even more but even the know face of Ling Chang could not keep him silence and he yelled loudly “Get away from me you demon” and before anyone could move or say anything he flew up and pulled his sword fast. As he landed on the ground again Ling Chang was having his sword as her face and a foot on her chest. Jun Chen was the first to react and he quick placed his sword between Ling Chang and Jun Chen’s sword even he knew it was making him vulnerable instead. “Let go off the sword and relax Jun Chen” Hui Wen yelled without caring about their cover. “Stay away, olding and leave this demon to me” Jun Chen yelled back while Ling Chang started crying as she had finally awoken from the quick attack that had happen.

Chapter 10 – Execution – Part 11

He noticed a tree not far from him and quickly he got an idea so he jumped back against the tree while the man keep attacking him. He felt the tree behind him and now he just had to wait for another attack. Jun Chen watched as the sword came closer and just in the last second he jumped away and was about to yell loudly of joy but instead of stopping the sword, the tree just vanished and the sword continued to fly through the air like it had never been there in the first place. “Did you really think it was that easy” The man yelled before attacking again like before. Jun Chen was speechless and started blocking the attacks once more. A new tree appeared behind him and he though for a moment before deciding to take the chance once more as it was better than to defend again and again if it was going to work this time. Jun Chen jumped back and the sword flew thought the air but just as the sword was closed to hit, the treen became a woman and even that Jun Chen did his best the sword hit the woman and she screamed loudly of pain while the man stopped swinging his sword for a while. Jun Chen ran to the woman and held around her as he tried to figure out what to don about her wounds and pain. “I am sorry” Jun Chen said as tears started to run down his checks even he had not the single idea who she was. He watched as the woman closed her eyes, making him do the same. The man started to raise his sword behind them but Jun Chen felt it and as he opened his eyes once more he yelled against the man “Why did you make me do this” and the man stopped the sword to answer. “I am trying to help you, my boy” the man replied calmly before the woman opened her eyes too and took Jun Chen’s sword from the and penetrated him and the man, making it impossible for Jun Chen to scream of pain as his mouth quickly filled with blood. His body feel to the ground and the world turned red before being completely dark as he closed his eyes a last time.

Low in mood

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Slow day but was fun to be at friend and now I am watching food ball but my mood for writing is not there as I am feeling down after weird sleep last night.

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Covers have been replace

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Today I have gotten the covers from my friend David once more and this time they have his signature on and I cannot wait to show them inside the book too

Cover for chapter 1 made by David Aragón
Cover for chapter 2 made by David Aragón
Cover for chapter 3 made by David Aragón

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